{"id":1392,"date":"2017-06-30T16:41:07","date_gmt":"2017-06-30T20:41:07","guid":{"rendered":"https:\/\/www.lucysnyder.com\/?p=1392"},"modified":"2017-06-30T16:41:20","modified_gmt":"2017-06-30T20:41:20","slug":"on-plots-in-fiction","status":"publish","type":"post","link":"https:\/\/www.lucysnyder.com\/index.php\/on-plots-in-fiction\/","title":{"rendered":"On Plots in Fiction"},"content":{"rendered":"<p>Simply put, a plot is the series of events that make up a fictional story or novel.<\/p>\n<p>My first really big epiphany with regard to plotting happened at the Clarion Science Fiction and Fantasy Workshop, which I attended when I was finishing up college. Before that workshop, I&#8217;d been writing short stories and had sold one, but I had no clear idea of why my other stories weren&#8217;t selling.<\/p>\n<p>I&#8217;d taken a couple of creative writing courses in college, and the instruction there had focused largely on the quality of micro-writing (in other words, the prettiness of the prose style) and on things like dialog and theme and metaphor. All good stuff, but the fundamental mechanics of what makes a story a story were treated as something that just sort of happens.<\/p>\n<p>During the week that author Joe Haldeman was teaching our <a href=\"http:\/\/clarion.ucsd.edu\/\" target=\"_blank\" rel=\"noopener\">Clarion<\/a> class, he started talking about the five-point plot as it relates to short fiction. As he explained it (and you&#8217;ll see different explanations around the Internet) this type of plot goes like so:<\/p>\n<ol>\n<li>You introduce your main character. He or she might not be <em>likable<\/em>, but he or she needs to be <em>interesting<\/em>.<\/li>\n<li>He or she has a problem that relates somehow to his or her character traits. This problem:\n<ul>\n<li>Means the protagonist wants something (an object, an achievement, an environmental change, a person, etc.) that he or she can&#8217;t immediately get. Desire and drive are important here.<\/li>\n<li>Needs to be revealed early on, preferably on the first page, ideally in the first paragraph.<\/li>\n<\/ul>\n<\/li>\n<li>He or she tries to solve the problem &#8230; and fails. Other complications arise due to the failure.<\/li>\n<li>He or she tries to solve the problem again, and fails or succeeds in a way that fits with his or her characterization and the themes of the story; for instance, if the story is a tragedy, the character will fail due to some tragic flaw in his or her personality.<\/li>\n<li>In the wake of the protagonist&#8217;s success or failure, he or she has experienced a meaningful change, and the story comes to a conclusion (denouement) that will be satisfying to the reader.<\/li>\n<\/ol>\n<p>This, of course, is not the only way to structure the plot of a short story. But before Joe&#8217;s discussion, nobody had ever showed me a story, popped the hood of the plot, and showed me how the story engine works. And having that explained was an enormous revelation! And it seemed so simple.<\/p>\n<p>I finally realized why my stories weren&#8217;t selling \u2013 my prose style might have been decent enough and my characters sympathetic, but the plots needed serious overhauls. Sometimes, it was because I had a whole lot of action but no real character journey or change. Other times, I had a main character who passively allowed things to happen to him or her without having a real stake in what was going on. I got to work, and I sold a couple more stories.<\/p>\n<p>Later, I got a second and equally big revelation from talking with Gary A. Braunbeck. He made me realize that <em>good<\/em> plots aren&#8217;t prefabricated obstacle courses you march your characters through as though they&#8217;re contestants in some game show. Your characters and their conflicts with each other have to create and drive the plot. But to fully understand the lessons Gary taught me, I first had to understand what Joe taught me.<\/p>\n<p>Since then, I&#8217;ve made over 100 short fiction sales. So, these were definitely lessons worth learning.<\/p>\n","protected":false},"excerpt":{"rendered":"<div class=\"mh-excerpt\"><p>Simply put, a plot is the series of events that make up a fictional story or novel. My first really big epiphany with regard to <a class=\"mh-excerpt-more\" href=\"https:\/\/www.lucysnyder.com\/index.php\/on-plots-in-fiction\/\" title=\"On Plots in Fiction\">[&#8230;]<\/a><\/p>\n<\/div>","protected":false},"author":2,"featured_media":1393,"comment_status":"open","ping_status":"open","sticky":false,"template":"","format":"standard","meta":{"jetpack_post_was_ever_published":false,"_jetpack_newsletter_access":"","_jetpack_dont_email_post_to_subs":false,"_jetpack_newsletter_tier_id":0,"_jetpack_memberships_contains_paywalled_content":false,"_jetpack_memberships_contains_paid_content":false,"footnotes":"","jetpack_publicize_message":"","jetpack_publicize_feature_enabled":true,"jetpack_social_post_already_shared":true,"jetpack_social_options":{"image_generator_settings":{"template":"highway","default_image_id":0,"font":"","enabled":false},"version":2}},"categories":[38,50,17,4],"tags":[97,94,95,6],"class_list":["post-1392","post","type-post","status-publish","format-standard","has-post-thumbnail","hentry","category-fiction","category-novel","category-writing","category-writing-advice","tag-novels","tag-short-fiction","tag-short-stories","tag-writing"],"jetpack_publicize_connections":[],"jetpack_featured_media_url":"https:\/\/www.lucysnyder.com\/wp-content\/uploads\/2017\/06\/1934891-e1498855133693.jpg","jetpack_sharing_enabled":true,"jetpack_shortlink":"https:\/\/wp.me\/p8qT6f-ms","jetpack-related-posts":[{"id":1486,"url":"https:\/\/www.lucysnyder.com\/index.php\/the-fix-up\/","url_meta":{"origin":1392,"position":0},"title":"The Fix-Up","author":"Lucy A. 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